Sunday, September 20, 2026

Bad Writing vs. Good Writing (The Psychological Dimension of Words): Pedantic/ Pompous Style



pedantic - caring too much about unimportant rules or details and not enough about understanding or appreciating a subject.

pompous - 1) having or exhibiting self-importance; arrogant. 2) excessively elevated or ornate.

A pedantic or pompous style is psychologically displeasing.  Compare these sentence pairs, identical in logical meaning:

1) "Behold! The inhabitants have all retired to their domiciles."
"Look! The people have all gone home."

2) "The vaulted dome of heaven is cerulean."
"The sky is blue."

Source: "The Trivium: The Liberal Arts of Logic, Grammar, and Rhetoric", Sister Miriam Joseph

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